Everyone should stay at school until they are 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education plays a pivotal rolein the development of a child’s mindsetas well as nature. It is believed that each person should attend school till the age of 18 and I agree with this opinion to a large extent.
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Pivotal:
adj. 关键的，中枢的
e.g.: It is a pivotalpoint that ensures the films is both poignant and relevant.
mindset:
n. 心态，思维模式，精神状态
e.g.: This more limited mindsetto entrepreneurism is slowly crumbling in the current economic environment.
Staying at school provides a constructiveenvironment for holisticdevelopment of a young child till adulthood. A longer education acts asan aid for building vital skills, such as team work and communication, byexposing students to challenging study environmentsthrough several individual and group activities. For example, throughconstant group assessments in school, such as assignments and presentations, children learn how to participate incollaborative situations, deal with different personalities and conduct complex social interactions, whichenhance their overall personal development.
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constructive:
adj. 建设性的，积极的
e.g.: We want to make sure that our governments are acting in that same constructiveway.
holistic:
adj. 整体的，全盘的
e.g.: While the brand has outgrown (长大/发展得使…不再适用) it nursery surroundings, production remains as holisticas ever.
challenging:
adj. 挑战的，富裕挑战性的
e.g.: But some critics said that it will be challengingto communicate these results to people most at risk.
participate in:
短语：参与，分享
e.g.: There are a number of ways that investors can participate inthe silver rally.
collaborative:
adj. 合作的，协作的
e.g.: It is a collaborativeproject between the The Ironbridge Gorge Museum Trust and Meadow Arts.
Further, with the increasing competition in modern society, a good education has become the key to achieving one’s career goals. Education provides everyone with not onlytechnical knowledge but alsopractical skills, moral valuesas well as ethical practice, all of which take a long time to develop in order to make a person ready to pursue his dreams.Leaving school early would result in one’s inabilityto progress in life. For instance, a school dropoutwould probably not be considered for a job in well-reputedcompanies because he or she would be pitted againstother well educated and rounded applicants who would be seen in better light as compared to the dropout.
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moral value:
道德观
pursue dreams:
pursue: Vt. 继续，从事，追求
pursue dream: 追求梦想
inability:
n. 无能力，无才能
e.g.: Others remember his inabilityto accept criticism.
dropout:
n. 中途退学，辍学学生
e.g.: The yearly doctor dropoutrate in private insurance exceeds 10% in many places, including New York.
well-reputed:
adj. 获得好评的，声誉好的
pit against:
V. 使竞争，使相斗
e.g.: The show format will apparently pitcelebrities againstcontestants before a studio audience.
In conclusion, I believethat it is tremendouslyimportant for people to remain in school till they are 18 as lengthier schoolingboosts complete personal development and competitive advantage to meet career aspirations.
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tremendously:
adv.非常地，可怕地，惊人地，tremendous的副词形式
e.g.: It was tremendouslyempowering to represent our members and their families on such an important issue.
lengthier:
adj. 很长的，冗长的
e.g.: Both head-hunters say recruiting a CFO now is much lengthierprocess than in the past.
aspiration:
n. 渴望，抱负
e.g.: It is the promotion of a fluid society in which aspirationis honoured and rewarded.
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